The Person I Want to Become in the Future

In the life, everyone wants to have a suitable job in the future(1). Who do you want to become in the future? For me, I want to be an English teacher (1). There are two reasons why I like to be an English teacher. When I was a child, I played role as a teacher in my class (1). I like Enghish and I love my English teacher whose name is An (1) . She taught me for three years in the secondary school (1). She is very beautiful, kind and carrying(4). She usually took care of us such as giving us lessons in class and in life (2). She like our second mother (1). Another reason is that I was born in a poor village, so just a few children can go to school. And my school don't have enough teacher of English. I wish I would be an English teacher so that I can teach them lessons of English and life(2). And now I'm trying to learn to have my dream come true. Also, If I became an English teacher I could earn enough money to live on and support my family(2).

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The Person I Admire Best

Have you ever admired anyone in your life(1)? For me, I admire my uncle best(1). He is 45 years old. When he was 35 years old his wife died in an accident(1). Now he is living with his two children without his wife in a small house in my village(5). My uncle, who works hard on the field, is a teacher in the secondary shool(1). He work hard every day in order to earn money for his children 's life so he looks very old with suntanned skin and suntanned hands(1). My uncle is very happy when his two chidren get good achivements in their life(4). When I have any problem, I usually tell my uncle then he always gives me helpful advices so I love him very much(1). I consider him as my father(2). He is experienced, humorous, generous(4).Sometime, he tells funny stories, it makes me and everyone laugh when we listen to(1). He always helps his neighbours when they need such as: repairing the roof, mending the door, giving money to poor people and so on. So I think I will do something for him when I grow up(1). Because,thank to him I learn many things in my life(1).
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