Have you ever admired anyone in your life(1)? For me, I admire my uncle best(1). He is 45 years old. When he was 35 years old his wife died in an accident(1). Now he is living with his two children without his wife in a small house in my village(5). My uncle, who works hard on the field, is a teacher in the secondary shool(1). He work hard every day in order to earn money for his children 's life so he looks very old with suntanned skin and suntanned hands(1). My uncle is very happy when his two chidren get good achivements in their life(4). When I have any problem, I usually tell my uncle then he always gives me helpful advices so I love him very much(1). I consider him as my father(2). He is experienced, humorous, generous(4).Sometime, he tells funny stories, it makes me and everyone laugh when we listen to(1). He always helps his neighbours when they need such as: repairing the roof, mending the door, giving money to poor people and so on. So I think I will do something for him when I grow up(1). Because,thank to him I learn many things in my life(1).
In this paragraph, direct object are italic and indirect object are bolded.
Could you please give your comment after you read my paragraph?
Thank you very much.
Hello Tan!
Trả lờiXóaI find that your written paper has many simple sentences,I think that if a sentence includes two clauses, you should underline the main clause.Then you classify it. I think that the sixth sentence belongs to the fiveth sentece pattern (not belongs to the first sentence pattern)
Beside, you need to set off direct object and indirect object.
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