Thứ Sáu, 20 tháng 11, 2009

Friendship

To me, my family is the most important, but my friends are important too. What do you think about the best quality of a friend? In my opinion, the best quality of a friend is honesty. I'm lucky when I have a best friend. Her name is Lan, who is intelligent and humorous. Last year, I had a problem. I lost my golden ring which is very important to me. My mother had given it to me on my birthday party. Therefore, I was scary and I didn't tell my parents. When I asked for advice , she advised me to tell my parents, she said:''They wouldn't be angry because they love you". I believed in her and decided to tell my mother. As a result, they forgave me. In high school, she is not only a best friend but also a good student. She always makes her friends smile when they have trouble, so everybody loves her so much. I am really happy when I have an honest friend like her. She never tells lie anything. For example, if you do something bad, she does not hesitate to give you sincere feedback. She will share with you everything when she does or thinks. When you ask an honest friend's opinion about anything, she is willing to give you good advices. Lan is really my best close friend. I think, the honesty results in trust between you and your friend.

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  1. Hello Tan!!
    Through your memories, I Really like your friend, I wish I will have chance to meet her in the future.HiHi!
    The sentence ". Therefore, I was scary and I didn't tell..." I think it should be " ;therefore, I was scary,and I didn't.." May be you forgot the order of punctuation marks.
    Bless you!!!

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  2. hello tan!
    you are very lucky ,for you have a good friend.I hope you have more friends in the future.
    in the nineth line, I think 'and' doesn't belong to coordinating conjunction,because after 'and'is a verb.
    coordination conjuntion is used to combine indepent clauses using a comma plus acoordinating conjuntion.
    goodbye!

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