In the life, everyone wants to have a suitable job in the future(1). Who do you want to become in the future? For me, I want to be an English teacher (1). There are two reasons why I like to be an English teacher. When I was a child, I played role as a teacher in my class (1). I like Enghish and I love my English teacher whose name is An (1) . She taught me for three years in the secondary school (1). She is very beautiful, kind and carrying(4). She usually took care of us such as giving us lessons in class and in life (2). She like our second mother (1). Another reason is that I was born in a poor village, so just a few children can go to school. And my school don't have enough teacher of English. I wish I would be an English teacher so that I can teach them lessons of English and life(2). And now I'm trying to learn to have my dream come true. Also, If I became an English teacher I could earn enough money to live on and support my family(2).
This is my pragraph, direct object are bold and indirect object are italic.
After you read ,please you can give me some advices .
Thank you very much.
Hello Tan!!!
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I think you should classify the main sentence if it includes two sentences. The sentence "when I was a child, I played role as a teacher in my class" you should classify the second clause not the first clause.If you classify the first clause, in my opinion I think it belongs to the fifth sentence pattern because "was" is a linking verb so "class" must be the predicate noun.
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